Comments : What Ravyn Really Is

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    - A rose without an alluring scent,
    An aurora without the shine,
    A smile without any of the joy.-
    ^^^
    These lines sum up this poem excellently. This is my favorite part of the piece, beautifully descriptive and powerful.

    Overall, I like this poem a lot. You expressed emotions on a great way and this is truly intense and creative from the beginning to the end. I like your choice of words along with very vivid imagery that you portrayed.

    Greatly done
    5/5