Comments : I wish

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Awwww...thats nice and sweet. I love it especially that part.

    I just wish i could run up to you and kiss you,
    I wish you would finally come and talk to me,
    I wish you were the one here with me right now.

    5/5 great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    Wow wonderful poem!!! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    Really good
    I LOVE THE LAST THREE LINES!!!!