That was a good poem.. it makes me sad but it is good

I love it and it brings memories of my past....but th poerm was beautiful

Wow. That was quite sad and it is depressing how children are abused by family members. Good work in expressing that...

cheers, josh

I like the way you chose to word your poem,There was a consistancy about it that just makes you want to read it.Very well done.

Wow this poems sad it really is hope this didn't happen to you.

Wow sad poem but really good...!!!

I liked the words you used

you could like feel the pain

which makes it sad..

but really good (:

Sad- but has lots of truth and and thought into it, well done.

For someone to not write a poem in a while that was really good.....keep writing its great!!!@@##$##

That was a very good poem. I went through almost the same thing. Keep writing!!

Wow! that was really good!!!! you should keep it up!!! it did bring memories back but it was very good!!!!
keep up the good work!!

Wow that's good. Your an excellent writer!

I really really like this poem.....i cried because it reminds me of what my dad used to do to me..........................................................it hurts alot..but i really like it

No, this was really good. Personally I think that u should have made it longer but it was still good. 5/5

.:Rach:.

I just don't get it...
haha when you write one poem you get like 20 comments but when i write one i usually get one. haha.
becca...you think some weird things. haha
love you. see you sunday or monday.

It was so painful and sad but even in the short way u wrote it,it rocked.....good job,u deserve 1000/5...keep it up

This poem made me cry because I went threw it.... but good job

Another Great Poem!! Keep up the good work!!