Comments : You Won't See Me

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good job xxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    This is a really sad poem. I don't think the flow was as good as the other ones. But it's still excellent. At first I didn't understand it, but I got to the second one and it was very understandable. I like the uniqueness of the poe; by that I mean the style of the writing. The way you made the first line of each stanza someone talking.

    Excellent 5/5
    Soda E>