That was really good keep up the good work :D

I cut not my skin, nor my hair
I only cut my mind, ripping and shredding what was once there.

this is my favorite line its incredible and so original this poem is amazing and im adding it to my favorites list =]

Waw ,its realy good poem,and the amazing is the picture you paint with this beautiful words and i live it through my reading,you got great talent and imagination,and i will red more of yours as i enjoy to read beautiful poems like yours.well done 5/5

Excellent title draws you in to a good poem well done xxx

I have lost what i was
And I don't really care
The pain is inside
this is not fair

much much like these words,
i feel same way , worderfull way to put the words,

hope to see more of tehse expression of teh words,

but i think it can handle more refining :)

"You were once love, peace and life
but Now I will just lift my knife
I cut not my skin, nor my hair
I only cut my mind, ripping and shredding what was once there."
Beautiful you should write more poetry great job 5/5 :]

Wow. This was a really good poem. It was very sad, but very well-written. I love the style and the flow of it. It was kind of cryptic, but I think that just added to it. Nice job.

Skye

This is a beautiful poem darling, I shall add it to my favorites, well done! :]
I hope you don't stop writing, it'd be a shame.
Beautifully done.

Absolutly amazing...very well written and great emotions 5/5...take care