I think the structure is a little off because it's obvious your rhyming in it, but sometimes it's three lines in a stanza or sometimes more. So I think that needs improvements. I like the general idea, and your last lines were my fav. Just work on your structure a little bit.
inthesetears

Nicely written... I like the metaphors you have used...but in some parts the rhyme is little off... otherwise its a good poem.. the descriptions is also wonderful..

Verry good i enjoy it much , very good work!!
:)

this was a godo one , i like very much 5/5 :)

please baby don't be sad of this thing
I am the music, and the music is me
and now that your gone, its set me free

thiose last , were the most i like they touch me in a special way

Well done, I love it. :]]