=( great!!! love it

=( great!!! love it

I like this cy, i love the style and tone.. instead of just saying what you mean, you gave yourself a character, you animated yourself.. it grabs attention

Wow drugs in this poem is very strong. I liked it though.

"Fu ck what everyone else needs
I need drugs
I need them now
I need to feel good"

I liked how this poem sounded self centered but you dont need drugs to feel good I hope you dont do that now.

"Whats that honey" We need to pay
our rent
Sorry spend it on coke nothing
left Not one last cent"

I like the honesty in this poem and the second person in this poem as well.

"What happen to the cash
Damm thats right I spend
it
Had to get smash"

I like the rhyme scheme in this I like it a lot. This poem just flows from one word to the next.

"Whats that baby you got a new man
got a new plan and I can go bury head
in the sand dammmmmmmm"

I like the ending, how the person who you are talking to sounds a lot older, this shows how addicts really are and I like the way it sounds. Great poem I enjoyed reading this very much.

Like it cy, it sums up how it feels to want what we love, but what we love is what we hate. NIce work....words are fab.....

Like it cy, it sums up how it feels to want what we love, but what we love is what we hate. NIce work....words are fab.....

Great write! nice job 5/5

I really don't think there is very much for me to say cos that was AMAZING!!!!! well done, your poems are always so honest and gripping!

Ur poem is interesting!!
I admire that U insist on doin sth no matter what and no matter who is against U..
Good job,keep it up
Take care and wish u all the best..

You are half way there because you acept your problem.................topoke

THIS poem is amazing! why do you torture yourself so much.