Comments : I Remember

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I remember when you were like a star shinning between my hands.
    And suddenly, you faded away in a glance.

    awwwwwwwwww fave line!!!!! *tears*

    i really do relate to this poem so much, thanks for sharing this one i loved it. well done hun keep writing xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow!!! you blew me away, this poem is soooo good, excellent, brilliant, magniffico.... luvvvvv it