Aww thats short and sad, has a good clear message. well done xxx take kare xx

Thats a really good poem, love all the emotion u put into it!!!

Wow this poem has alot of emotion in only a few words i like it

*annak*

Every emotional :)
i loved it
i write poems lik this one,
so i know where ur coming from
short, but great
5/5
amazing job
:D

Wow!! so deep and so much emotions.. Wow!!! Amazing job.. Please take care.

Oh wow... I feel pain when I read this. It is very good! I don't really know much about poetry so I can't give you a comment like "the words worked in time with the whatever"... but I can say that this is a great poem. It's not often that I can read something and actually feel the emotion so strong. Very well done!

Wow. this was short but so powerful. such strong emotion. i loved it.

--aprils conspiracy

Great emotion in it. Well done
5/5

Aww that was sad, but so vivid. good job. keep it up Shanik