I love it, thanks for posting it it was an honor to read

The poem had a really good flow to it and the wording was great also.
The story, however was so ver sad....
I hope this is not about you and how you are feeling.

5/5 Ingrid
ps Thanks for commenting on my poem, it is a true story.

Excellent opening line, good flow and stong ending. great job xxx

It's not about how i was feeling but i was kind of depressed one night and i just needed a way of getting my feelings out and writing helps that a lot

Thanks to everyone by the way for commenting