I'm so sorry about your loss.

A very good poem.

It had a nice flow and didn't sound forced.

5/5 for sure.

kelsey xx

I am sorry about your loss.i have been there to the pain never really never leave. but you always remember the good times.but i loved your poem. very touching.

Aww this is a really moving one, well done for writing it out xxxx

That was an amazing poem just beautiful

Gen this is a very sad poem. Losing one we love and that means so much to us is one of the most painful things we ever have to deal with.

Are you just a memory?
Or did you never really exist
Another hallucination
Continuing to persist

You will have the good memories to keep your friend alive in your mnd and heart.

If you never walked this ground
There was no suicide goodbye
Figment of the imagination
You would never have had to die

This is such a sad way for someone to die. It leaves the ones that love them always wondering was there something they could have done to change things. They are left suffering the pain.

Whether you're just a memory
Wish, dream or hallucination
I'm here suffering, walking
Your brave smile as my inspiration.

Gen I hope the memories of the good times help to heal the pian that is in your heart.

Good job!
Love Cindy

R.I.P-Adam- January 21st 2008 aged 19
(written March 2008)

I know the feeling. I can really relate to this poem. And the way you wrote it was amazing It was very deep and very well written. I can tell you meant every word. Nice job and keep it up. feel free to look at my work. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Whether you're just a memory
Wish, dream or hallucination
I'm here suffering, walking
Your brave smile as my inspiration.

Aww Gennie, so much sadness comes from this poem....
You makes such beautiful poetry, I am glad you decided to come back to us:)

Love, Ingrid

Wow, very tragic. i'm so srry. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

My oh my darling- you have such talent. That's a beautiful poem, and I'm sorry for your loss, I love the last line, it makes the whole poem shine even brighter, but not in a happy way which is great for this type. Great job, I love this poem.

Very deep poem with lot of sadness flowing from every single word.

Whether you're just a memory
Wish, dream or hallucination
I'm here suffering, walking
Your brave smile as my inspiration

Loved the ending, poem that could make anyone speechless.

all the best and take care

Very bicely written, and good story