Some stains r hard to erase n they stay grudingly.... The more u try the more they stay there leaving u tired, exhausted, feeling lost n in more pain that u tried with all efforts... but it did not yeild the fruit one expected..

I felt sumthing like this reading ur poem... it had a journey of sadness n clouds with tinges of darkness as well...

U can portray pain so truly..

Keep writing Ash..

Best wishes,

karan

OMG! Just wow!!! I can't lie this poem was truly amazing! I loved it so much. I added it to my favorites,

Stuck to the core, heart and whole,
it's not something to forget - it's a heart you stole.
Beckoning be the light that shines now bright,
an end to the way that remains out of sight?

^^^this stanza made me cry. no joke. I feel life this a lot. Wonderful simply wonderful. Keep it up Ash!! 5/5
Kaity

It hurt deep inside to read this, amazing poem.. I can't begin to speak my mind on this piece it simply left me speechless..
Great work Ash
Regards Arun. 5/5

Wow.........
Very, very well done.
So emotional. Powerful. Beautiful. In a way, tender?
Perhaps you as a writer, with pilot eyes: eyes that miss nothing.
Yet like most... the saddest eyes you ever saw.
I loved this. Brilliant and even more brilliant. It's a gift... to bring a poet into the world.
To express the joys and pains of existence... though so very far apart from one's own.
It's all very well.

5/5