You pictured the dreamy part in me... in the car especially... I love the picture you painted in this poem especially this stanza
Beside the window, she stays
Beside the window, she listens to the moon
While he is weeping like a small child
Complaining his feelings to her, as she was his dearest bride.

Loved it amazing work xxx

I loved ur lil conversation...U know sometimes we feel comfortable when we talk to the sea..u made a change and made this conv. between u and the moon ..
My fav stanza is

Beside the window, she stays
Beside the window, she listens to the moon
While he is weeping like a small child
Complaining his feelings to her, as she was his dearest bride.

This really attracts me bcoz u let the moon be the one that complains and she listens to him...This is original..
Loved it really..
Good job,plz keep it up..