You'r amazing gaby!
5/5

Excellent, awesome work hunny bunni!! xxxxxx

WOW this poem is really good i love it

Floating through the velvet cotton
that you keep stuffed in your brain
kind of like a miniature outer space
burning red with desirable pain

personally, a very interesting enkjoyable poem to read. the opening stanza caught my eye and kepted me hooked. though, through-out the poem i couldn't quite understand every section to the poem, which gave it a sence of mystery, leaving my mind puzzled and looking for more, an overall great effect. i truely enjoyed reading this poem, with its interesting use of words and great ideas- tara