Comments : Heart Vs Mind

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara

    They say mind over matter
    is all your life really needs,
    to bad my mind has gotten lost
    to the heart that slowly bleeds.

    a great ender to an amazing poem. at first i thought that it felt like two different poems put together, the first section and the 2 stanza's about the heart verses the mind. the last one did tie it together nicely, though i think the transition could flow a little better together. but in the end an enjoyable poem to read with much thought put into it. sometimes our heart and our mind want two different things. you translated that well into the poem, great job ------tara

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Beautiful poem! i love it its amazing.
    the words u used are brilliant.
    i can relate 2 this one.. 5/5
    keep up the great work!
    love love xo

  • 11 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Wow. Its been a while since I've been on here. I had forgotten how well you write. This was an excellent piece. Just like a lot of your other poems = ). I hope you are well. 5/5

    Take care