I like the way you lead the reader only to surprise him at the end...nice job.

Ahahah.. it's a short poem but I believe it's beautiful!!! 5/5

Its not totally done!! huh? im desperate its im not satisfy haha!! anyway 4/5

I was wondering about this at first,a dn then the end really surpirsed me! Good all around!

Well i love the imaginary tt u have portrayed here...This poem is cleverly crafted...I can visualize the essence of the shower scene. You have certainly have a great selection of words to make the poem stnads out

Excellent Job
5/5

I can completely picture this, very nice detail. It's short but it says what needs to be said. It's an amazing poem.

"gently caressing my body"

That's my favorite line. I'm not sure why though.
The whole poem is beautiful all together. Great job
5/5

TB