This is a really sad one, i got moved with this part " ... Talk so greatly of a mothers love, but i dont deserve that i guess am not enough " that statement really potray alot. Sorry for all this, thats if the poem is true. Good work.

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wish you had a mum who cared hun, keep writing xxx

"blaim" should be blame but overall an amazing poem, almost made me cry
~Toni~

Freeky fascinating & a poetic flow from a genious

Wow, this is a sad poem and yet so beautiful at the same time. If this is your heart your talking about, I know what your going threw I havn't talked to my mother in 4 years, and She dosn't even care. But very well written I give it a 5*5

I'm so sorry about ur sister if she dead...I hope you and ur family can recover from it
i feel as if i can cry.. :(

Honey i understand it. sounds like my mother. it sucks doesnt it...im really sorry you feel that way and you do deserve to have a great life, family, friends. dont let anyone else tell you different. xoxox

Love Emmy