"Stop, turn, take a look around at all the lights and sounds, let 'em bring you in..."

~Lights and sounds- Yellowcard ((i think))

Dear Reader, can you feel it?
Warm tears down your face?
Or do my twisted stories and blinding lights
Bring you to a better place?

^ thanks for dragging the tears out jesse. was a good enough day without them.

Another place, Dear Reader?
Where lover's love you back

^ no such thing. lover's love goes to good friends instead..how the dice rolls.

But all my words are void of sound
As the blinding lights grow black

^ lights are still too bright..please, somebody turn them off. like NOW.

good job, jesse.

As all these lights grow blinding
Melodic sounds turn to screams
Words flow from my pitch black pen
One more tragic poem or broken dream

- fav. part
luv metallica, the quote, and the poem, alot

Aww wow, that was a very well penned poem, really deep and strongly written, excellent keep it up xxxx