Sad poem. Betraying someone is one of nastiest thing people can do to each others..

You love someone and he betrayes you.. Crushing your tiny little heart for one hundred small pieces...

And you ask yourself why... And this memories of yesterdays...killing you inside..

Keep on writing.

Thats good i like the flow and good twist at the end when it turns from happy to sad. good work xxx

A nice one.

poem was able to express the depth of emotions.

i liked it.

keep writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good poem..truly amazing...its hard to tell which part i like the most!

Good job. Needs a little critiqing when it comes to verb tenses but good flow. Sad story behind it but good poem none the less

Awww i liked it :]] it ended to be sad :\
Rawr..Can i put it on my folder? :]]

Yeah ..of course..
I'm very glad ...thx