Comments : Why

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    It's a lovely poem, I didn't think you had it in u to write love poems... change the title into a more interesting one, try basing it on these two lines
    I am suffering from that crack.
    That infected the wall of our love.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Nice poem!
    very sad it touched my heart

    you know, you remind me of myself when i was so depressed when my ex disappeared out of sudden

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    :( so so sad hun.

    please keep them coming xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its realy sad,and full of love feelings,i feel like the words come from your heart not from your mind,beautiful wors and nice flow,you got talent so keep it,and keep write,never stop.5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    " Everythin will be Ok in the end,if it is not ok so it is not the end"...The past is past so u gotta look forward and forget about what happened b4..
    God always makes things up to us so sure He saves u a perfect person ...try to smile from ur heart:)
    Love:)..