Good work, excellent flow to this xxx

Awww. thats such an adoriable poem :) GREAT job!!!

A neatly composed sad poem...

good.. keep it up..

best wishz... karan

This is a very sad yet beautiful piece because it shows that even though your love said goodbye thus killing you slowly you will never forget or say goodbye...

I open my eyes
I cant see
all is black
dirt is over me
under ground I lay
worms kiss my lips now
^^
This sent shivers down my spine because of the worms kissing you. Fantastic Imagery though.

Take care, Em