Thats was really good!^_^

Haha this is cute

Great poem very cute also

I can relate i really love this one

Awww, bless!

That is so some thing i can under stand my masha did that to me and now this is a great poem

Wow! this one is interesting and something ive never heard before :) great work.

Wow. Cutesie yet with a powerful impact. Good job. :)

Hi PP, sorry but i dont think its cute? how can anyone think, cute is being hit by your mother for peeing the bed, when your scared of the dark monsters and only want a cuddle, off your supposed protector??Great poem, but hardly cute, well done x P

Thats really good. Its kinda ironic and that makes it even better.

Nice one emotions could be expressed in much more better way
ne ways theme is clear so no problem with this one nice poem

That was really good! I like it

I loved this one i can relate to it so well

Its better simple. That's why I like it hehe. Its simple but has a powerful message
5/5

Cheers xo

Awesome poems... love it

WOW just WOW this is not cute but it is really good, it really sad because this is a part of real life for some unfortunate people and some of those people grow up to BE great!
It was amazing!
good job!

Wow rlly great, i loved it
5/5
ur a great writer

Very good i like it

Thnx 4 the comment this is brill x

This is very different then what i'm used to reading, enjoyed the uniqueness :)