The sadness and reality of this piece made the hairs on my back stand on end. So pwerful, deeply gut renching.
You've expressed this in such an honest way.
This line will and does stick in the minds of many "why is this happening to me?"
A question that we'd all love to know the answer too. It's the not knowing that is hard to understand because there really is know answer, unfortunately it is the way it is, we are the way we are, thats how we were made, thats part of the life we got given and who knows maybe there is a reason but we just have to try and fight for what we want, thats all we can do.
Keep fighting, my prayers are with you.
Well done on this piece, 5/5

This poem is very touching and i realted to that because my friend has suffered everything in this poem and you have wroded it very well.

well odne for writing this its a very moving poem xxx