The light is out there waiting for you, dont give up cos you can and will be free xx keep writing xx

Good work- i am sure that light is waiting for you, just persevere you will get there! I loved it and you surely have my vote...5/5

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Very very ood-i think its the best out of the ones ive read in terms of flow and rhythm.

very sad though :( last stanza was great-however the way i read it, the last line needed one more syllable-maybe "i will continue to lose the fight" i dont know-im probs reading it wrong-anyway-

another 5

aish
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