This is really good well done xxx

Well done !! that was really nice. I think its deep though it is short, but the meaning and the emotions expressed in the words are perfectly shown.

I like it
i tend to hide my feelings from ppl a lot myself
sometimes its cause i feel weak sometimes its cause i think they wont understand and sometimes i just feel like i cant talk to any of them about it
i think its good t owrite about it cuz if u hold everything thing in for too long it never turns out well
4.5/5
=)

Wow this was really good. I could feel the flow of emotiong in every line. You did a great job with this piece and you deff have talent. Keep it up =]
5/5
~Forever Broken~