Truely a great work of art now if only i could convince you to try and do a double schemed poem with me i think it would be awsome i would let you post it if you give me credit. but no doubt this poem is one of ur best

I walked along the same path,
you and me...
the same goals shared.
Now it's all different.
I have to walk away.
But you'll never know the reason.
You'll think I'm a selfish friend,
you'll hate and curse.
But deep down you won't know....
That I'm leaving,
Cos I love you....

most beautiful lines i ever read....

keep going

Oh goodness! What a lovely poem, I'm going to add it to my favorites, it's beautiful.

I hate goodbyes... wish y do tey ever have to come n tat too at d wrong time..

Just joking.. there r so many questions n answers in the poem itself...

Nice poem as always,

Keep sharing,

Best wishes to ash..

Karan

Superb . 5/5

Great job

Very moving poem from the heart, enjoyed reading this poem, made me feel quite emotional, thank you for sharing it