Hi Jim,

I like your voice here. It is indeed true, one should spend his time wisely!

Take care,

Ingrid

So spend your time wise , my friend by nourishing your soul..

I could not agree more with you, Jim!
Beautiful poem, with a deeper meaning;)

Hugs,

Ingrid

Time goes on , With me or without,
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Sounds like something i would say.
I love how you stayed on one subject in this poem the whole way through.
You sticked to time.
Spending your time wisely, and for things that have purposes, becuase one does not have all the time in the world.

With each poem I read I find pearls of information and knowledge.

Time goes on , but in one single direction,
Of the meaning of choice it has no conception.
Unlike time , I am free to choose!
to do as a winner , Or to knowingly lose.

A lot of people don't realize that they are the ones that have to choose and not blame others for their mistakes
this flowed nicely as all your poems do. with emotion and messages

I really like the style of this poem. Unique and fun. well written 5/5

So very true.

Time goes on , and on , it always will,
For time you can waste, or spend but never can you kill.
All you kill when wasting time is the progression of your goal.
so spend your time wise , my friend by nourishing your soul

The entire poem was very well written and enjoyable but this verse was my favorite.