Wow very amazing....just wow

Every poet aims to catch an emotion, but you cature the whole moment in time. i would love to hear this to music!! don't worry i won't steal it. lol

Its great.
Amazing.
It flows, and has emotion.
Great imagery.
Great words.
Great rhymes.
Great poem.
5/5

What a beautiful flowing poem of someone with the inate ability to look iwards and recognise what he sees.i know someone else who wrote a poem in a similar manner just a lot shorter.I understand why you said go look.i just thought there was something wrong with my head.LOL.Well done on a stunning write.

Grant

I really am in awe of this poem
The flow was perfect, the rhyme was right on, the words inspirational.
You have surpassed any other poem I have read.
great job.

An inspirational piece of work- I absolutely adore it. Praise be the lord! And you really nailed the last verse with:"For without me you're not worth as much,
As A tiny lump of coal !
Because A man is worthless,
Without his eternal soul !"

I loved everything! The structure, the imagery, the relation, the contrast, the poem, the flow and the layout. Well done. Outstanding... simply outstanding. You have my vote, Jim.
5/5

A beautiful poem Jim. I loved it. You must have been very much in touch with the 'Man Within' to write this. What wonderful insight.
Brimming with Truth. God bless you for sharing it.

Thank you for taking the time to comment my poems, it was a nice surprise as I have not been on the site for a while.

Speechless. This poem is so wise and so stunningly written. I love it. It sent shivers from my head to my toes! I don't even know what to say. This really does say a lot about you. Fabulous!
~Kayla

Bravo. After reading this, I have so many thoughts about the meaning of this poem but it would take a book to put them all down. The most important thing I can say is that during the past 2 years I have been searching for the person within myself and the person I was and now realize, I have found them. All I can say is this poem is excellent and bravo.

It was so amazing, i loved every second of it!!