Very unique, i love it
creative as ever

Hm interesting. Very creative and original yet powerful and full of emotion and truth, Fairly short yet the message makes up for any variety of length or description. Great write keep it up

Wow, babe, just like...wow.

a fragile little girl slices into her flesh for the first time tonight,

^^ God...i remember something so similar to that..only it happened the middle of the day.

Monique, sorry I've gotten behind in commenting, i feel bad. i'm doing the best i can to keep up. this poem is so sad, hun....it's wonderful, bittersweet.

*hugs*

Excellent opening, good description hunny.

this is a really touching subject and one it hink needs to be written more about for people to understand. keep writing you express the words so well hun xxx