Comments : My Dream

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney

    What you have is certainly special, and you do a phenomenal job at showing it.
    The story within the poem is heartwarming, and inspires me to be able to have hope for finding a similar true love, someday.
    I think you may benefit by making sure that 'I' is always uppercase.
    It makes the piece easier to read, overall.
    Great job, keep writing.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    A right that goes to show dreams can come true...gives the reader a little bit of hope to hold onto their own dreams.Well done on such a beautiful write.