Ah , it shows life in a very great way...u have pointed towards death through that man..

5/5
cheers
biya

Nice work heba and i like it , and you write it in beautiful way,and i love this part alot:
I am the one who could kill your breathe
I am the one who could drag you down to that grave
It is the place where you can be my slave
wel done 5/5

OoooOOoooo nice
you done a great job at rhyming it

Such an amazing poem

Well,the poem is so deep and true...I'm always attracted to stuff that is about DEATH...and I liked that u symbolized it through that man that is mysterious bcoz no body can know when or where they die but everybody should wait fr it bcoz it is certainly coming..
Great job,keep it up100/5