I wish more people could read your work. you can say a paragrgh in a single line, i'm looking forward to the rest of the benifet of light. thank you

Niiiiiiice work.

"I know I must continue to try,
To remove what blocks the light!
It's not as hopeless as it once did seem,
Because hope is coming in sight !"

To me this poem seems to set up for THIS stanza.. It all is amazing work, but this stanza just took my breathe away.

I loved it all, this is definitely one of my favorites of yours. Thanks again for sharing. =D
-Ally

Wow.
It was veryy good.I am really impressed.I hope i could write such thing.You are really Creative,it seems you have very strong emotions.Really i dont have words to praise what i have read and juddged you from your writing.It is really verry good.
I am submitting my poems in this forrum and i need people like you to read them,give me suggestions and corrections,so that i can also improve my abilities.It will be very nice of you,if you please take out some time and read my few submitted poems.I would love to hear some possitive criticism from your side.
Love
Junaid

So if you see me chasing shadows ,
Remember one thing of me!
I am not running after lost illusions,
But searching for the light to see !
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My goodness that is a powerful stanza. This was just a perfect poem with a serious message.
great write
5/5

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
Love

"Because you cannot see A shadow,
Without THE BENEFIT OF LIGHT !"
-a profound Truth....well done..

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My only issue is with all the exclamation points..
I believe they distract from getting a subtle feeling for the deeper meaning of many of your images and words...

Very good and very inspiring!

I have read this several times and try as I may cannot pick out just one verse that would be my favorite. They are all very good and I shall make this one of my favorite poems. Thanks for writing this and suggesting it for a read, it mirrors my thoughts from before I had the Benefit of Light.