Wow great poem

Wow love your poem, like the way you potray your emotions. Your poem flows very well, like the rhymes too. Well thought of and nicely penned. Keep up

Really well-done...

And, in response, I must say:...The Truth is, death is, indeed, inevitable...The Real question is...What are we going to Do with our lives while we wait?...We absolutely Will die....Can we truly, courageously, and meaningfully, Live?

This is amzing work, write more!! xx

Wow this is a really good poem...definetly write more poems.

Rhyme is good, but you must hone the skill, some of it just does not seem to fit.

Somebody save me,
Somebody save me,
Somebody hold me,
Somebody take me..

This just has too many "somebody's" in it. I didn't even read them all I would change this part to read:

Somebody save me,
Hold me,
Take me..

In the end of this write and your last I read, you seem to let go and it works wonders, you just need to apply that to all of your writing and realize they don't always have to have a rhyme scheme, bn ut if they do, it must flow.