Hmmm...
sometimes all we want to do is know how the person feels.
its hard to comment on your poems enless you understand them. but i like the way you write. just short and to the point.
keep it up =]

Lol. no dont kill your self over men. just getting your heart broken is enough pain.

5/5

I get what you're saying. Its simple enough.

"I can't live without your love"

but try to make it a little longer. Its so short and sweet, its giving me a cavity XD

A poem is suppose to make you question a little bit what the author truly intended. Its a great way for a poem to reach depth, where it can have a simple meaning, although it almost seems like there SHOULD be a deeper meaning.

Trying making it longer and a little bit of a rhythm and it should turn out fine. At the moment its prob a 3/5, but i'll wait til you work on it before I make further judgement =p

Aww this poem is sooooo good.=)

Dang! Great poem

He didnt =,(