Exactly how I feel about some people

Wow
very deep poem
i can feel your pain, i really can

loved this part alot

"I am so near to lose my brain
I am so near to be insane
Pain and sorrow are the only treasure that I could gain

I am staying there alone
Crying and shivering from skin to bone
Sinking in sadness and desperation
Giving up my hope to isolation"

I absolutely loved reading this poem. I think everyone can relate to that situation and those feelings...they just don't like 2 admit it. well done, that was a honest portrayal of the truth! keep up the good work!

Ohh God i feel like i'm that person in ur poem ! A lot of depression and grief haunted me 4a long time,bas thanks God i'm still surving after all that !
We need some bad experiences in our lives in order 2grow a strong woman or man in us ...

I am staying there alone
Crying and shivering from skin to bone
Sinking in sadness and desperation
Giving up my hope to isolation"

This stanza attracted me the most...The whole poem is awesome..by the way I was in the same situation someday but we have to go through bad and horrible experiences to learn ...and we gotta move on in all cases...Bad memories will vanish and the lessons we learned will stay..
Great poem ..plz keep it up..

*Excellent keep it on i love ur poems !