I LOVE THIS. the flow, the ending. the words just have a brilliant, strong poetic flow my fav

"why do i cry wishing to die
why did she say goodbye"

I like how your asking questions, and I like your rhyme scheme here.

"why do i care about her anymore
why do i still love her
why do i still need her here to breath"

I like your honesty in this poem. Very good job.

"and i can move on with my life.
so i have to say GOODBYE!@ "

I like how you started off in letter format with "Dear self" And ended with goodbye, it really sounded like you were having a conversation with yourself. good job

Strong poem this is well written xx keep it up x

Why is self petty easier than standing up?