Comments : With A Smile.

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    I really like this. I love the repitition of:

    "I can see the joy you feel with the things you do,
    With all the pain and suffering you cause
    You do it with a smile."

    Such powerful lines.
    Keep it up! :D

    5/5
    ~FountainsOfBlood

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Powerful work keep going hun xxx