Awww thats so sad, well done for writing it xx

Very deep and sad poem.

i especially loved this part --
"
I am gonna miss you baby,
when push comes to shove, i'll be infested with bugs of regret,
and i'll lie down on a bed of 'what ifs' and unfilled dreams,
i'll long for you to be there, no matter what i said. "

you can feel the hurt, and pain. the longing. very well written, nice flow.

Shez gonna miss ya baby... such a sweetly timed lovely poem...

keep it up...

best wishz... Karan

Oh my god its such a sad poem

She's gonna miss you baby,
when shes all alone, crying inside an empty house,
her heart ill mirror shattered pictures,

it realy touched my heart....... and i felt so alone... .. excellent poemmm u are a talented writer...