I'm definatly liking this poem:) Way to go girl, we have to show those filthy lying boys how scumy they really are;)

Okay. i am absolutely LOVING this poem.. and the meaning.. and everything. lol. but here are a few pointers. if u fix these.. then i give it a 5/5. until then.. unrated.

Congratulations! This is great!
Why, you've won this fair and square.
I have to say you truly deserve it.
And for me to present it, is only fair
After all, I recommended you,
I thought you were the best!
Only you could swing this thing,
And you have passed the test.
So here it is you cheating scum,
Whom I USED to love and desire
To my precious, evil, idiot pet
Congrats!
You're the World's Most Accomplished Liar.