Good work well done xxx

Well written and nice flow.. keep it up!

Well all pple will say to you keep going their always light in the end of the tunnel ,
but form me somtiems, that light pulb may borken simetimes, and somone will tellyou sorry girl their is no light in the end of the tunnel ,

but i tell you girl ,
dark might be this life , but you will find every light beam in it a joy when all soo dark ,
youa re a looser? well that is what you think?? and a periode of time , you will feel

we all do ,

the poem is good , but it lack much speicaly in rhyming !!

good work

Tnx for that...

Well,i know life sucks..but dunt give up wat so ever..keep smiling even if they're fake..who knows maybe they'll be real one day..there's always hope..life goes on..dont stay depressed..laugh and be happy as much as u can..wish u happiness :)..u nicely expressed ur feelings..keep writing!!