by neo
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Great poem. if you format it in lines, not a paragraph the "simpletons" of the world may better understand it. sad & lovely at the same time 5/5 |
by Ares
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It's a very raw poem, very good:) |
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Wow i kno the feeling ur amazing 5/5 |
by Mike
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Your poems arnt bad ther pretty good this poem hits close to home |
by Andrew
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This is really sad. Its bad knowing a mother does that to her own flesh and blood, so sorry i hope you work things out and never say goodbye |