I like how it is short and to the point. The rhyming scheme is different but I like it. 5/5!

Short poem but really really good!! :)
5/5 from me :)

Short but cute:)

Powerful words x

Good.. itz different

keep it up...

best wishz...007

I think short poems say so much more, they can be direct and punchy and don't get boring by labouring the point. I like this poem very much, it speaks volumes. Great expression. 5/5

Short, but obviously very good. Possibly a little longer? I like longer poems. :] That's what prefer, but short ones are good also. You could add more , but if you don't want to then that's your choice. I don't mind. XD =) Keep it up, 5/5

It's a nice one. Though it's very short but nice to read. I wouldn't say you could could add more because that's depends entirely on the writer. All I can say it's good. Nice to read.

So simple yet so true. It speaks the truth of half this nation. It's so sad to see these people throw their life away. Even if they didn't have much of a life they still had a chance. Now they kill themselves with a poison that goes deeper than the organs, It leads to suicide, murders, depression. SO many things. It's like a disease.....one that spreads by touch almost. A very honest write. I love it.
~*~Amber~*~

Very well written. It went to the point. I loved it!
5/5

keep it up!
-Ally

Excellent short to the point, which makes it more difficult to do well as you did here. A most enjoyable read well done

Grant