This is really good well done

Wow... this is beautifully penned..

'And everyday is painful, constantly seems I'm shaking
Tears pooling in these eyes, this heart is slowly breaking
Nails become so weak and brittle, hair gone dry and flat
Dropping pounds every day but all that I can see is fat'

^^ the starting is amazing.. from here on the reader is captivated to read on... so wonderfully described...

'Slowly dying, so tell me Ana...am I good enough yet? '

^^ the ending is sad... depressing .. and a feeling of pity arises...

excellent write..