Wow, what an emotional poem.5\5 keep up.

That...oh my god...it was great... 5/5...all the way...It really made me think...and remember

*~holly~*
Amazing

Wow, this poem was amazing
so passionate i can feel your love

excellent

Good job. I really liked this. You have alot of emotions that run through this poem excellent work 5/5

A very nice write is all I can say! :)