I love this poem you are a really good writer!!! keep writing!

Very good poem masha'Allah!!
i really enjoyed it.

i liked each stanza, the first one seems almost normal to me but the rest were so good.

keep writting sis or i will catch you soon hehe

Lovely pem again..

keep sharing ur thoughts thru nur valuable pems,

Berst wishz,,

karan

So remember in every step you take
Those feelings inside; you shouldn't fake
And if you love someone just say I do
And this would help you to get it through

my favourite stanza.... i thought it was sad...... 5/5

THis is a very lovely poem...i liked it..keep it up5/5

Great poem, Feelings so strong.
Loved it.

"But I knew I had to let go someday
And stop feeling that am always the prey
Because love can be the answer you need
Or it can hurt you and make you plead"
That is part about love is so true.

"So remember in every step you take
Those feelings inside; you shouldn't fake
And if you love someone just say I do
And this would help you to get it through"

But I am afraid to tell him how I feel
And how easily my heart he did steal
Although I know we are so far apart
How do I say "I fall for a stranger's heart?"

This part is amazing, The last line was just perfect. Great, lovely poem. One of my favorites.

Great poem keep writing!!

Wow definitely reminds of my ex..long distance

Great job!