Comments : I should See

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Aw knock this guy flat on his back and give him a wee shock. If its all true i really think you should tell him to sling his hook - it will break your heart but by the end of it you will be strong and it will give him a wee shock too cause he probs doesnt expect you to do that. You are just setting yourself up for even more heartache this way and from your poem and emotion in it i get the sense that you have suffered enough already. Take Care.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Youve really put a lot of work into this poem, it shows. you have wroded it very powerfully. well done xxx