Wow i liked this one alot it was really good and i can relate to this too. I fell head over heals for my best friend and this i would say goes for alot of ppl as well!((5))

What i ment was alot of ppl can relate

Cheers all i can really say

I love this soo much babe shes soo lucky

This is cute =]
i like it
good job

A good poem but honestly you dont need to be with one person just cause he/she can make you happy and feel alive once again there are alot of people who are out there and can help you feel and make you smile and wants to run into your arms and collide with your heart!but i did like it good job i liked your emotions.

A good poem but honestly you dont need to be with one person just cause he/she can make you happy and feel alive once again there are alot of people who are out there and can help you feel and make you smile and wants to run into your arms and collide with your heart!but i did like it good job i liked your emotions.

I love it great poem hun

That was simply amazing...it DID INDEED sound like coming from your heart...i was touched...i enjoyed reading it that i smiled at the end...just pure... :)

keep writting!

AWWW!!! this poem is so sweet! I absolutely loved it! 5/5

This is a very sweet poem =]

Youv'e displayed your emotions honestly and the flow carries through all 3 stanzas really well. It's nice when somebody has that special someone that can make them smile =]

Wow, she is really lucky. You express your emotions really well :)

Aw this was beautiful! i loved it.

"I want to be near you with our hearts as one,"
^^that was beautiful! great job!
Aly.

5/5

That was amazing it really touched my.

Nice write... Good expression, and from the heart.

Very well done :)
Olwin.

This is a truly amazing poem. I loved the way you said what you were trying to say. The poem flowed throughout, well done. 5/5 xx

Beautifully written, this short piece made the poem very easily understandable and showed the pure emotions
great readx

Awww... Beautiful! I love it. So simple yet very well-written. Great job!