Wow............
Marble glass eyes ne'er closed
and hope, a lie, lived deep in its heart
hoping, hoping...someone would find it
and over again life could start

great line sweety i loved it

Dunno what to say about this poem, it's beautiful and has so many meanings, I like the whole story to it... 5/5

I LOVE IT ITS SO DEEP AND SO SWEEET AND SAD I LOVE IT! ITS REALLY GREAT AND HAS ALOT OF EMTIONS!^_^

Wonderful poem.
It is great..
i love the way it was written, and how something so simple could touch me so much.
Keep up the great work babe.
your amazing
ily! :]

Awwww this is one of my faves you have done, this is so sweet. its so so good. well done you have such an amazing way with your words and they just flow like its a natural talent you have. well done again keep on writing xxx