Nice cllaboration...

Keep it up

Best wishes,
karan;)

This was a great collab. you guy work well together. I could feel the emotions pouring out.

Dreams now scattered upon the oceans waves,
once thought these feelings were part of agonising plays.
But within these memories live more than anything gained,
the platform of ultimate despair attained.

^^^ i LOVED THIS STANZA IT WAS VERY DIFFERENT and it rlly grabbed my attention. wonderful job. keep it up 5/5

"..The ways of life had suddenly changed,
Distractions of the mind now rearranged.
Each path be far from truth prevailed,
Darkness left the echo's wailed.."

Gosh,.. after reading this .. all im left with to say is .the wording .. PURELY EXCELLENT!

I think it simply describes the jjourney/passage into the afterlife.. leaving behind all that we couldnt find ..

"..Dreams now scattered upon the oceans waves,
once thought these feelings were part of agonising plays.
But within these memories live more than anything gained,
the platform of ultimate despair attained.."

An amazing piece of how just simple words can stir your soul..

"..Soldered away beneath heaven's gate,
the time would come when none would wait.
Two names lie still in memory of that day,
"Hereafter forgotten" will be the last words to say.."

Great Work Here.. im suprised it hasn't been Commented on so much .. its truly a Remarkable Write.. one of the best i've read in a little while ..
Great Going .. Super Collab =]

~Wake~

Purely great job on your part ash i am glad to see it up lol awsome i say 50/5 for each of us that makes 100/5 on the poem

It's been long since i have read one of yours and it still the same; your poems has great effect on me.
this collab was wonderful it shows two styles of two great writers

well done my friends