Well... very well written with strong collection of words. The lines are pretty strong too. Creative writing...

-Diamond-patterned tongue illustrates wildfire
crawling across recombined heartbeats
doused with flourish hissing of emerald sun
which embedded witchcrafts into frigid aura.-

^First of all wow! Impressive description, truly, it is refreshing and so detailed.
I think that you lack some punctuation here, core is very powerful yet, I personally think that it would be more effective with some punctuation signs to separate thoughts.
I suggest you to put some commas.

-Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons.-

^This is excellent line, very clear description and it is vivid. Good choice of words too.

-Words surrender to the effigy of winged winter,
embodying malediction within nightingale's heart
as phlegmatic addictions allure silhouettes
outlined with ink of gunpowder and blood.-

^Fore some reason I dislike description -winged wither-, and here you also need commas too make it easier to follow but other than that truly impressionable stanza. Each heart posses something which impressed me, you managed to make atmosphere on very creative and intense way.

-Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons.-

^I like this description, it gives connection in whole poem and makes it compact, also it added a new hue to the story under words.

-Icicles, like needles, ornament cyan halo,
embracing frail petals of inner aurora;
snowy watercolors reflect sensations, as
stripped temptations mold enticing gaze. -

^First two lines left me without breath with captivating beauty within them, so vivid and memorable picture.
I don't see why you used comma in third line.
In a way ending line impressed and didn't impressed me, first I thought that you will finish with some effective line which refers on
-Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons.-
That would be great, I think.
On the other hand last line was quite spectacular, definitely remarkable and powerful.

I love this piece, I enjoyed in each stanza, you wrote it with a lot clever and unique thoughts.

Wow wat a poem... I enjoyed all d three different stanzas n d pattern in which u have stitched everything together...

Best write

keep it up..

best wishz.. karan

Stunnign write here, filled with rich illustrious imagery, brimming with passion, agian i thought your use of words was exceptional,
im suprised at the quality of the works on this site, truly this is a great poem,I admit i found it hard to follow at times but the images you conjured made it worthy of a 5/5 well done!!!

Ok, first thing that stood out to me in this poem was

'Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons', this metaphor was amazing also you used repetition to convey to the reader that this was a dominant and important part to you poem.

Most of the sentences, were declarative meaning that you used descriptions vety well. Some were imperatives showing you used a lot of verb usage also which is crucial in poetry to help describe to the reader atmophere and meaning.

Even using a simile in this poem meant you really used all kinds of format which is really good.

Really enjoyed this poem. Good job

Alex xxx

Ok, first thing that stood out to me in this poem was

'Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons', this metaphor was amazing also you used repetition to convey to the reader that this was a dominant and important part to you poem.

Most of the sentences, were declarative meaning that you used descriptions vety well. Some were imperatives showing you used a lot of verb usage also which is crucial in poetry to help describe to the reader atmophere and meaning.

Even using a simile in this poem meant you really used all kinds of format which is really good.

Really enjoyed this poem. Good job

Alex xxx

Ahmm.. honestly i can't really understand the exact meaning of it but base on my own comprehension it talks about a woman who only knows how to speak harsh feelings... by the way, i admire the words and the imagination the you have created itwas so unique

This is an amazingly beautiful poem. The vocabulary really makes it a wonderful read. Awesome job. And thank you so much for the comment, I really appreciate it.

Diamond-patterned tongue illustrates wildfire
crawling across recombined heartbeats
doused with flourish hissing of emerald sun
which embedded witchcrafts into frigid aura.

--i feel that it is missing some punctuation but your description is very intricate. you used a lot of descriptions that most people would never be able to come up with.

Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons.

--i love that instead of just saying blue, you used cerulean. thats a much more detailed description of the eyes than most would put.

Words surrender to the effigy of winged winter,
embodying malediction within nightingale's heart
as phlegmatic addictions allure silhouettes
outlined with ink of gunpowder and blood.

--i like the very last line. for some reason it just pulls me. still missing punctuation it feels butthe detailed descriptions make up for it.

Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons.

--said it all the first time

Icicles, like needles, ornament cyan halo,
embracing frail petals of inner aurora;
snowy watercolors reflect sensations, as
stripped temptations mold enticing gaze.

--this is an amazing poem though i cant seem to figure out what it is supposed to be about. other than missing punctuation it is extraordinary

This is amazing...truely captivating..loved it !